I like the setting and how you made it so dark. It was a overall good presentation. I have one question, how come you were not talking in some of the parts of the monologue
Dear Peter,
I like how you didn’t show yourself on camera I think it shows how nervous and shy Boo is. I like the accent that you did it was really good because it was choppy. I think that you should’ve talk a bit louder and talked more consistently instead of stopping for 30 seconds and then talking for 40 seconds. Overall really good job.
Peter, I really liked how you had the accent because it made it sound more like Boo. But I do think that you could’ve talked a little louder and didn’t have as many pauses, but other than that good job.
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I liked the way you set up the setting. I have one question. How come you weren’t talking in some parts of the monologue?
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I like the setting and how you made it so dark. It was a overall good presentation. I have one question, how come you were not talking in some of the parts of the monologue
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Dear Peter,
I like how you didn’t show yourself on camera I think it shows how nervous and shy Boo is. I like the accent that you did it was really good because it was choppy. I think that you should’ve talk a bit louder and talked more consistently instead of stopping for 30 seconds and then talking for 40 seconds. Overall really good job.
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Peter, I really liked how you had the accent because it made it sound more like Boo. But I do think that you could’ve talked a little louder and didn’t have as many pauses, but other than that good job.
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