Dolphus’s Decision by Kylie


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  1. Dear Kylie,
    I loved your monologue! I loved how your clothes and props reflected Dolphus’ life. I also noticed that your script was very well put together. You asked questions to yourself and thought strongly about an option then doubted yourself. By doing this your script seems very natural. I also really liked at the end Dolphus realized that he doesn’t need the town’s approval of his wife and children. In the novel Dolphus never realizes this lesson and it’s cool to see this scene based off of the novel instead of a scene directly from the novel. One suggestion I have is to make the shots a little bit less choppy in between takes. Overall your monologue was very well put together, great job!


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